My Shining Star

I am going to heaven today to buy a star; my friends asked why I just do not buy a car.
I tell them I have to go to get a star for the one I love so I will always see him when I look 
above. 

He is very ill and will leave me soon, where he will fly and soar around the moon.
I will name his star “my heart” because when I look up at night I know we will never really 
be too far apart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 20, 2010 at 9:25 PM
very sweet, Jennifer. Congratulations!
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April 19, 2010 at 2:31 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Shining Star poetry contest Jennifer. Love,Carol
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April 18, 2010 at 4:00 AM
So sweet and loving Congrats Jennifer
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April 17, 2010 at 4:23 PM
Congrats Jennifer on your success in my "Shining Star" contest.. a special and unique write and win for u to enjoy.. thankxxx for supporting my contest...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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