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My Shining Star

I am going to heaven today to buy a star; my friends asked why I just do not buy a car. I tell them I have to go to get a star for the one I love so I will always see him when I look above. He is very ill and will leave me soon, where he will fly and soar around the moon. I will name his star “my heart” because when I look up at night I know we will never really be too far apart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/20/2010 9:25:00 PM
very sweet, Jennifer. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/19/2010 2:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Shining Star poetry contest Jennifer. Love,Carol
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Date: 4/18/2010 4:00:00 AM
So sweet and loving Congrats Jennifer
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Date: 4/17/2010 4:23:00 PM
Congrats Jennifer on your success in my "Shining Star" contest.. a special and unique write and win for u to enjoy.. thankxxx for supporting my contest...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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