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My Shining Star

You're a genie of the lamp your magic is too powerful you shouldn't be allowed out on the street, your beauty is compelling your face is like a shining star I'm praying for the day that we will meet. You're a summer butterfly elusive and so beautiful the kind of thing that dreams are all about, you're Cinderella at the ball I'm captivated by your charm and you have turned my whole world inside out. This is just a treasure island and you must be my treasure trove I've been searching everywhere for you, you're the sleeping princess I want to be the handsome prince that with a kiss makes all your dreams come true.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/28/2009 12:05:00 PM
It was my pleasure to read your excellent piece of poetry today Norm. It has been awhile. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2009 9:55:00 AM
Love your form of rhyme. Your word pictures come across clear and your emotions are laid bare...good write...Lary
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Date: 7/27/2009 11:54:00 AM
Interesting work. Keep writing. Sara
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