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My Rose

Red dreams, Ruffled hair Uninhibited laughter Bliss My....rose, And yet my drive My incentive to love In every genuine smile My rose, And yet you are my concrete I've never grown so much before I've never delved so deep before Green, refreshing trust, Warm skin Refreshing conversations Rest My rose, And yet my very life My desire to explore My burning to find Home My rose, My true Love You are so much more than beauty You are a value I can only marvel You are what keeps my heart in orbit

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James Inman

Date: 12/11/2019 2:01:00 PM

To have a poem like this written for me. What a dream.

J.W. Earnings

Date: 2/13/2019 4:17:00 AM

This poem is touching, creative and simply awesome! I love the style and the lovely words in it. Have a good rest of your week :) -JWE

Justin Bordner

Date: 2/1/2019 7:07:00 PM

"You are what keeps my heart in orbit...", very few hearts can survive a crash, and fewer can rise back into Love's orbit...you and I have risen marvelously. I just realized, that from the word rose the word sore may be known, as in a sore heart. A rose of love cannot bloom fully without knowing soreness my beautiful Poetess...Justin