My River of Serenity

surreal in nature
like sailing on a dream
watching light dancing on the surface
from soft reflecting moonbeams

so subtle is her beauty
peaceful thoughts come so easily
as I drift inside her current
she sets my spirit free

gliding on her gentle flow
through twisting turning bends
hopeful is my heart 
the river will never end
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chachere Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 4:40 PM
This is a wonderful poem. its somewhat like my ~His Pressuring Feelings~ in some parts. -Always Lynette
Strand Avatar
January 3, 2010 at 7:46 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Ron.Rgds Brian
Mckenzie Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 6:46 PM
Ron~ Very nicely done great flow! I hope this is for the contest! Laura :)
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