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My Rhyming Rhythm And Poetry

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My Rhyming Rhythm And Poetry

My Rhyming Rhythm & Poetry

Meet the bones who met the meat that was formed as flesh with blood in the mist of creation.
Please the wild indignant wind that bursts the sea agaist sea rocks to release it frustration. 
Please the heart of the world that is full of graves in the land and, calm down the beating heart that motions waves in the ocean from deep in the stomach of the dead Sea!

Be the best out of the worst that leapt out from the beach with cleansed skin of degraded Jews.
Be the dream and the land of our forefathers who slept the longest night in the blood stained desert that is washed by the late night dew.
Be the sharpest spear and the strongest shield that was held by your kings, fighting with stunged hearts in their land as their ring.
Be the selfless ancestor that saves for the next generation, and remain self-evident about those who enslaved you in your motherland and also infront of their gods and goddesses.

You ought to be a blessing, be a message to the young and future.
You don't have to choose between Jews, Hebrews, Greeks. Torah and Gita, The Bible and the Quran.
You are an African, the Truth, true Colour, my Life, Religion and Meaning of the world.
You are my Africa, My rhyming rhythm and poetry!  

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 2/10/2017 9:28:00 AM
M La Mellz, a very passionate and urgent plea to be that selfless protectorate for those who come after us. So difficult in a world speeding thoughtlessly into the future. Powerful poetry! g
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Date: 2/14/2017 8:00:00 AM
So difficult but we better and Fail not fail to try George. Thanks alot!