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It gloomed in the room
Just when my thoughts bloomed
I felt a blowing air
In seemed so near 
I was ready to err
But it was not fair
It was so great 
But not as my grade
Then i smile 
Seen from a mile
Though it was mild
But not be wild

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/4/2018 10:02:00 PM

through coarse and wildness sometimes something comes goodly...///nice

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/23/2018 1:11:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup! You said you did not know the type, but I think it is a quatrain/rhyme mix. So maybe a free verse? A nice poem for your first posted, Otu. Sending you blessings that your muse will be creative, and you will share more poetry here.

Lyric Man

Date: 8/20/2018 7:29:00 AM

Otu.. nice rhymes!!