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It gloomed in the room Just when my thoughts bloomed I felt a blowing air In seemed so near I was ready to err But it was not fair It was so great But not as my grade Then i smile Seen from a mile Though it was mild But not be wild

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Date: 10/4/2018 10:02:00 PM
through coarse and wildness sometimes something comes goodly...///nice
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Date: 8/23/2018 1:11:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup! You said you did not know the type, but I think it is a quatrain/rhyme mix. So maybe a free verse? A nice poem for your first posted, Otu. Sending you blessings that your muse will be creative, and you will share more poetry here.
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Date: 8/20/2018 7:29:00 AM
Otu.. nice rhymes!!
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