My Religion

Contrarian religion is my undoing.

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/25/2011 7:35:00 AM

enjoyed reading todday!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2011 4:18:00 PM

HI, John, I'm going off now. I have to do an hour and a half tutoring session on my way home. I am squeezing in every second I can since it's hard to fit in soup time with joe not working. About the Perfect One, it's nobody I know. I hope it's a person who exists!

David Williams

Date: 8/23/2011 2:26:00 PM

profound. you can have any share of my OCD. David

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/22/2011 7:09:00 PM

Gemini?

Nancy Jones
Date: 8/22/2011 11:59:00 PM

cool

John Smith
Date: 8/22/2011 11:05:00 PM

Yes

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2011 1:18:00 PM

hmmm, this gives one a lot to think about though it is so short!!

John Smith
Date: 8/22/2011 5:41:00 PM

Please, don't read too much into these. Mostly it's fun to find words that go together. But I am 'contrary.' If one says there is no God, I'm like to say there is; and vice versa. In other areas, too; puts some off. Hence, 'my undoing.'

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/22/2011 11:41:00 AM

Interesting work..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for stopping by "Blood Bled Red"...Yes, it was true story from my life..Our youngest daughter had surgery for Scoliosis..The dr fuse her from between her shoulders all the way down..Back then they went in the hip and got bone so two incisions..She survived and did well..Sara

John Smith
Date: 8/22/2011 5:47:00 PM

Thank you. After I hit 'submit' I read your note. No doctor, though, should ever talk to parents with the blood splatter of their child. That's a huge no-no; unprofessional. I'm glad she came out well.