My Religion

Contrarian 
religion is 
my undoing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Culverhouse Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 7:35 AM
enjoyed reading todday!!
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 4:18 PM
HI, John, I'm going off now. I have to do an hour and a half tutoring session on my way home. I am squeezing in every second I can since it's hard to fit in soup time with joe not working. About the Perfect One, it's nobody I know. I hope it's a person who exists!
Williams Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 2:26 PM
profound. you can have any share of my OCD. David
Jones Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 7:09 PM
Gemini?
Jones Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 11:59 PM
cool
Smith Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 11:05 PM
Yes
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 1:18 PM
hmmm, this gives one a lot to think about though it is so short!!
Smith Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 5:41 PM
Please, don't read too much into these. Mostly it's fun to find words that go together. But I am 'contrary.' If one says there is no God, I'm like to say there is; and vice versa. In other areas, too; puts some off. Hence, 'my undoing.'
Kendrick Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 11:41 AM
Interesting work..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for stopping by "Blood Bled Red"...Yes, it was true story from my life..Our youngest daughter had surgery for Scoliosis..The dr fuse her from between her shoulders all the way down..Back then they went in the hip and got bone so two incisions..She survived and did well..Sara
Smith Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 5:47 PM
Thank you. After I hit 'submit' I read your note. No doctor, though, should ever talk to parents with the blood splatter of their child. That's a huge no-no; unprofessional. I'm glad she came out well.
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