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My Questionku

You saw me walk...
                                                Then watched as I jumped...
                                                Will you always catch me???








by Michael J Falotico
Written for "Questionku contest"

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Skat A

October 7, 2015 at 11:14 AM

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Skat A

October 7, 2015 at 11:10 AM

Good question, Whoever she is. I know you are the man to always be there for. SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

December 11, 2012 at 3:41 PM

this one is very interesting. I quite like it. congrats for your win.

Richard Lamoureux

December 11, 2012 at 7:45 AM

Congrats and thanks for entry.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 11, 2012 at 4:28 AM

May be , may have to think about it. lol Congrats on your winning spot my friend xx

Vicky Tsiluma

December 11, 2012 at 1:51 AM

Congrats Michael!

Holly Moore

December 9, 2012 at 2:33 AM

I came back to make this a fav...I really like it...Thanks for your comments! xxoo Holly

Poet Destroyer A

December 8, 2012 at 10:59 PM

gosh I love this one so much.... can you feel it the question??? wow... xox~PD

Harry Horsman

December 6, 2012 at 5:05 AM

only if you promise to keep writting wonderful poetry.....

Gwendolen Song

December 4, 2012 at 8:34 PM

Are u going around NYC jumping outta window just so women will catch you?....hahahaha....I can just picture this questionku being written and carried out! ...I worked Thanksgiving as always!! When I retire from work I can enjoy the holidays more fully! Rog did cook his first turkey this yr tho...that rocked! :)

Vicky Tsiluma

December 4, 2012 at 3:21 AM

Lovely! It has an air of progression - a journey through life where one has to wonder if things will always work out the way they have.

Bukang Liwayway

December 4, 2012 at 2:16 AM

wow!! I like this very nice haiku of yours friend Michael :) Good luck in the contest.. hugs

Poet Destroyer A

December 3, 2012 at 8:39 PM

yeah..Houston Texans... playoff... yeah... the great poet destroyer...

Poet Destroyer A

December 3, 2012 at 8:38 PM

I love this questionku... a very clever idea for a contest... and if you ever fall in front of me,, the answer is YES!!!! nice to see you here again..always~ a COWBOY fan... <--- lol... PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 2, 2012 at 11:38 PM

r u ready for some great Monday Night Football luv??? go Giants .. the Redskins r a worthy division foe with Griffin at the helm so Eli needs to be at the top of his game .. watching with u with bated breath luv .. JG on high speed ahead .. xoxo

Poet Destroyer A

December 3, 2012 at 8:40 PM

Manning gurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr..... xox~ my bff...

Russell Sivey

December 2, 2012 at 8:25 PM

This is a masterful question, and if I think this correctly, she would always catch you! Great Work!!

Duke Beaufort

December 2, 2012 at 8:15 PM

Great poem on several levels. It's a question of confidence and trust. I love it when the deep issues like this are handled so smartly.

Ilene Bauer

December 2, 2012 at 6:48 PM

great question, wonderful poem!

Yanny Widjanarko

December 2, 2012 at 5:10 PM

This is a really realistic question, because not every time people could catch us in our every single jump, great questionku Michael :D, thank you for your visit in my pages, they are really motivated me more :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 2, 2012 at 8:27 AM

oh yes to answer your Questionqu Michael luv .. love is ever present to catch glorious lover .. winning wishes to u .. JG in high creative gear .. methinks u spark my inspirational instincts .. forever xoxo ..