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My Promise I'll Keep

When we first fell in love, You told me you were scared. Lovers always run away from Problems in the love you shared. I promised you that wasn't me And I'd never run off on you. If something happened in life, Together we would see it through. Well, that problem finally arrived And I was shocked by surprise. You were running away from me. I didn't see any tears in your eyes. Now we barely even talk. You keep pushing me away, Knowing that I promised you That I would always stay. This is going to hurt a lot, That I can already tell. You are going to break my heart And put me through hell. Even if I only get your love Like scraps thrown to a stray, I'll be right there waiting For what you give that day. And when we get past this, I'll be right there for you. I can't give up on our love. I've never had one so true.

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Date: 2/19/2025 9:35:00 PM
Tenacity for sure. I like your style of expressing relationships. I like the romantic rhyme. Thank you for your creativity.
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Mathew Sturgeon
Date: 2/19/2025 10:30:00 PM
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Mathew Sturgeon
Date: 2/19/2025 9:39:00 PM
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