Lily Mayfield Poet Rhyme

My Promise

From the very first day
I had to have you
You looked my way
And I just knew

Your smile caught my attention
Your words drew me in
You left me in suspension
Now I’m happier than I’ve ever been

I’ll never leave your side
I’ll never hide away
Even if you died
I would never betray

I’m here for good
I’ll never leave
Like a good wife should
I won’t deceive

Take this as a dedication
Of my love to you
I have no hesitation
When I promise my love to you

Written in October 2012

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Kim Merryman March 31, 2013 at 4:06 PM A lovely declaration of devotion. Congrats on your win, Lily! Love, Kim Lily Mayfield April 1, 2013 at 8:49 AM Thank you so much, Kim! - Love, Lily

Ralph Taylor March 31, 2013 at 11:01 AM Congrats, Lily. Beautiful Well done. hugs, Ralph Lily Mayfield April 1, 2013 at 8:49 AM Thank you, Ralph!!! -Love, Lily

Poet Destroyer A March 30, 2013 at 10:55 PM Lily, congratulations with your awesome love poem.... rendering the best part of life~ always*LINDA Lily Mayfield April 1, 2013 at 8:50 AM And as always, thank you, Linda :) -Love, Lily

Fred Bell March 21, 2013 at 10:47 AM nice poem really a delight Lily Mayfield April 1, 2013 at 8:50 AM Thank you, Mr. Bell :) - Love, Lily