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My Promise

From the very first day I had to have you You looked my way And I just knew Your smile caught my attention Your words drew me in You left me in suspension Now I’m happier than I’ve ever been I’ll never leave your side I’ll never hide away Even if you died I would never betray I’m here for good I’ll never leave Like a good wife should I won’t deceive Take this as a dedication Of my love to you I have no hesitation When I promise my love to you Written in October 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/31/2013 4:06:00 PM
A lovely declaration of devotion. Congrats on your win, Lily! Love, Kim
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Lily Mayfield
Date: 4/1/2013 8:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kim! - Love, Lily
Date: 3/31/2013 11:01:00 AM
Congrats, Lily. Beautiful Well done. hugs, Ralph
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Lily Mayfield
Date: 4/1/2013 8:49:00 AM
Thank you, Ralph!!! -Love, Lily
Date: 3/30/2013 10:55:00 PM
Lily, congratulations with your awesome love poem.... rendering the best part of life~ always*LINDA
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Lily Mayfield
Date: 4/1/2013 8:50:00 AM
And as always, thank you, Linda :) -Love, Lily
Date: 3/21/2013 10:47:00 AM
nice poem really a delight
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Lily Mayfield
Date: 4/1/2013 8:50:00 AM
Thank you, Mr. Bell :) - Love, Lily

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