My Promise

The sweet smell of a budding rose
Gently kissed by the morning dew
Waits to spread her velvet petals
Until the suns love is in view

Peeking out from her ivory shell
The bairn robin tousles her wings
Waiting only for father time
And the gift of flight that he brings

A flower that is picked too soon
Is denied its floral apogee
The anxious robin that tests time
Will not fulfill its destiny

Patience, the key to survival
Just as every breath sustains life
We can not rush or veer off course
Regardless of pleasure or strife

So as to matters of the heart
I find myself standing at bay
Hiding all that I feel inside
As not to frighten love away

Time will tell if its meant to be
All enduring, ardent and true
A love that can withstand times test
And so my love, I’ll wait for you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005



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Date: 3/22/2009 12:31:00 PM
Patience...a key to survival, you've hit it on the head there babe! You're a very advanced writer....an inner wisdom shared! The way you use your poetry to really SAY SOMETHING... is the main reason I like it~!:) A wise thought about life and love and patience is always something that should be shared! This is a beautifully constructed, captivating, sharp poem. Friends always at the shhhhoupie...Jane PS~I came to this poem by pressing read a random poem by a random member! Neat hu?
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