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My Pretty Hummingbird

My delicate flower This rare orchid.............. What you just did Feel its' power Petals to unfold Ready to grow My story untold Ready to know My pretty hummingbird Accept my honey dew Free for you You have the last word Act as you do Draw in to me Irridescent wings My honey dew, is only for you, amongst other things This whirr of wing My petals unfold Honey dew I bring Only for you My story now told She is compelled to seek My honey dew, with her beak Pretty hummingbird Needs me too The sweetness I leak honey dew to give Pretty hummingbird to live Petals unfold My story now told

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/7/2019 5:17:00 PM
Such superb imagery matthew, thanksfor sharing:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/21/2009 6:24:00 AM
Exciting imagery almost succulent on the tongue ... the hummingbird is transfigured in all its beauty ... and you are a rare greatness melted to delicious words of poeima
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