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My Prayer

GOD they say when it rains that is you crying please look down on me and see how hard i am trying i know i have no right to ask you for the things i do i should not get angry when some of my dreams dont come true i know your really busy but sometimes this spinning world makes me dizzy i try real hard to hold on but you can only hold on so long look down on me for just one minute show me all the reasons i should be in it my life is not that bad compared to some of my fellow sisters and brothers but not that great compared to some others please look down

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Date: 7/12/2016 5:20:00 PM
Your Poem, is full of feelings.
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Date: 7/4/2015 2:08:00 AM
well done
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