My Prayer
GOD they say when it rains that is you crying
please look down on me and see how hard i am trying
i know i have no right to ask you for the things i do
i should not get angry when some of my dreams dont come true
i know your really busy
but sometimes this spinning world makes me dizzy
i try real hard to hold on
but you can only hold on so long
look down on me for just one minute
show me all the reasons i should be in it
my life is not that bad compared to some of my fellow sisters and brothers
but not that great compared to some others
please look down
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