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My Power Point

My power point I lost My ink to the roots of reality's closed My stick to walk when the edges of my ankle sores Sinking slowly in boat I've watched My inner builder just a one faulty step it fell Like winter tree leaves it blew away As there were no foundation it never stood Died like little rats poisoned in food My power point I lost In the heart it ache so bad I weep With tears in my pillow can't sleep So much of what I don't need Planted in my path with a strong seed Developing no matter how I try cut the ties

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/10/2013 8:56:00 PM
Aphiwe, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/4/2013 4:49:00 PM
Aphiwe. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda"
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