My Poetry

in my poetry
my skys are either blue or grey
though i never mintion it
i picture them that way
and love is always conservitive
i like the shakespereian style
romantic and superblative
always for my readers
i like to tell the truth
reviel the hidden treasures
in the way my words are used
for example:
i am not opposed to sword fights,
fist fights, threaghts, or duels.
lovers should defend their territory
with every God given tool.
love is love and yes there's jealousy
for what is love without it
if there is no real blood involved
there's a chance someone will doubt it.
like i said, conservative.
i say love is words and deeds
not seeing how much you get if you plead
but showing how much you love
when you bleed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kearley Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 12:53 AM
I see what your saying here...Nice write! Love is love...
Esquire Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 7:21 PM
Dear "The Situation?" Many Bravo's: Encore Your POETIC TAPESTRY So Pleasant to Read I Thank-YOU for the Comment on my Poetry "The Sadness in and of POETRY" I appreciate Your POETRY Wisdom, With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Eternal Liege...HG
Wesley Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 4:47 PM
I doubt if you are conservative; you seem to have quite a bit of passion in you to write these wonderful works. Love reading so keep up the great writing. Luv, Lizzie
Carrillo Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 4:15 PM
My Poetry - I love your style. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem. Lucilla
Cooper Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 8:22 PM
lovely and divine I love this poem! I will collaborate with you anytime ! I am sure someone will come up with a collaboration contest soon.
Ball Avatar
February 14, 2012 at 12:05 PM
I agree, actions speak louder than words. God Bless, JB
Minardi Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 9:44 AM
Well, The Situation, this is such a good deal of a poem. You totally nailed the message, and the ending, GOD! Loved it! :) thanks for stopping by. Anyway, are you a girl or a boy?Sorry, just can't help it! :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 8:13 AM
OUtstanding how you ended this one. I loved the line: "but showing how much you love when you bleed." Yep, I was here when it crashed. I should have more clearly stated in my poem, if that crash were to be "permanent" In that case, I'd start my novel. hahaha
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