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in my poetry my skys are either blue or grey though i never mintion it i picture them that way and love is always conservitive i like the shakespereian style romantic and superblative always for my readers i like to tell the truth reviel the hidden treasures in the way my words are used for example: i am not opposed to sword fights, fist fights, threaghts, or duels. lovers should defend their territory with every God given tool. love is love and yes there's jealousy for what is love without it if there is no real blood involved there's a chance someone will doubt it. like i said, conservative. i say love is words and deeds not seeing how much you get if you plead but showing how much you love when you bleed

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Date: 12/7/2012 12:53:00 AM
I see what your saying here...Nice write! Love is love...
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Date: 7/14/2012 7:21:00 PM
Dear "The Situation?" Many Bravo's: Encore Your POETIC TAPESTRY So Pleasant to Read I Thank-YOU for the Comment on my Poetry "The Sadness in and of POETRY" I appreciate Your POETRY Wisdom, With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Eternal Liege...HG
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Date: 3/23/2012 4:47:00 PM
I doubt if you are conservative; you seem to have quite a bit of passion in you to write these wonderful works. Love reading so keep up the great writing. Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 3/6/2012 4:15:00 PM
My Poetry - I love your style. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem. Lucilla
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Date: 2/22/2012 8:22:00 PM
lovely and divine I love this poem! I will collaborate with you anytime ! I am sure someone will come up with a collaboration contest soon.
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Date: 2/14/2012 12:05:00 PM
I agree, actions speak louder than words. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/13/2012 9:44:00 AM
Well, The Situation, this is such a good deal of a poem. You totally nailed the message, and the ending, GOD! Loved it! :) thanks for stopping by. Anyway, are you a girl or a boy?Sorry, just can't help it! :)
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Date: 2/13/2012 8:13:00 AM
OUtstanding how you ended this one. I loved the line: "but showing how much you love when you bleed." Yep, I was here when it crashed. I should have more clearly stated in my poem, if that crash were to be "permanent" In that case, I'd start my novel. hahaha
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