My Poetic Prose

My Poetic Prose Standing in my home’s backyard, gazed at the skies No poetic prose jumped out, but two staring eyes It swapped the branches of a tree by a daredevil jump Whirling, twirling, passing in mid air, getting the hump. All the summer on the tall tree bare and brown See how the brown leaves are fluttering down This squirrel, my poetry, bobbing from eyes so bright Busy now hunting for nuts to hoard with all her might In an old nest of crow or pie in a hole where day by day Nut by nut for her winter store explores stores away So that when winter comes with its cold and storm She will sleep all curled up all snug and all warm. She looks and again and again after storing there So she could remember, she hid the treasure where.
=================================== Date: 8-12-13 Dr. Ram Mehta Fifth Place win Contest: Put Your Best Rhyme Forward by Just That Archaic Poet
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Dome Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 2:11 PM
Wonderful write congrats. enjoyed it very much. Very visual and so well written. excellent well done. best wishes. Pete.
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December 13, 2013 at 8:07 AM
Congrats on your win for this beautiful poem. Loved always, bl
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December 11, 2013 at 7:08 PM
Congrats on your win. It was a very well written poem....Roger
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December 11, 2013 at 3:02 PM
A very entertaining and charming poem to read! I enjoyed it! Congratulations on you win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem, as always!
Dome Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 5:02 AM
What a wonderful visual write. very well done, best wishes. Peter Dome.
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December 10, 2013 at 8:46 PM
congratulations..luv..pd
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 3:45 PM
Dr. Ram, I think I am looking indeed at your best rhyme ever. This is so creative, I have to fave it.
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December 10, 2013 at 11:56 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: "Put Your Best Rhyme Forward" contest: Sponsored by: Just That Archaic Poet - Nice to take part - a pleasure to read yours Dr. Ram - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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December 9, 2013 at 6:15 AM
Beautiful rhyme flow. I know Chan will love it. Good luck to you in the contest, my friend. Licia :-)
Haick Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 9:18 PM
They are so interesting to watch! Best of luck in the contest, Dr. Ram! Thanks for reading my latest poems... Always, Annalise
Virden Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 11:01 AM
"She hid the treasure where"? Funny, a little odd I can relate with squirrel... Haha lol A wonderful piece
Davis Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 8:19 AM
Dr. Ram What a charming and creative write. I feel like I am right there in the beautiful scene watching the squirrels activities. Nice job Thanks for the congrats on my Vampire poem.
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December 7, 2013 at 5:21 AM
Dr. Ram, you know best that going through the thrill of poetry the heart grows fonder thus birth gives to poetic prose!
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