My Poetic Life

this love n pain i spill in words
i hope it hits your soul
while staying up and hearing birds
they still dont make me whole
i write to try and ease the pain
but the deeper i go
its like a splinter in my brain
so i continue... slow...
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June 19, 2011 at 7:49 AM
Nice expressions of dedication, Jeremy
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