My Poems,My Dreams

From youngsters to seniors,
Free or behind bars,

Persons traumatise,
By sickness,from wars,

Recovering from drugs,
Healing deep scars,

Or just chilling,
Drinking wine with caviare,

I had a dream,my poems,
Read near,read far,

Even by aliens,
Sipping champaign,
On nameless stars...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 26, 2014 at 10:34 PM
Wow- This is the 2nd I have read of yours and let me say, you are truly talented.... and I see you set your sights ahead, farther than most.
Palmer Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 9:47 PM
Thanks Amy,honored,blushing,if you are not reaching for the stars you ain't reaching
Jalees Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 3:37 AM
Wow too gud !!your words are mesmerizing me !!! I wish I cud write like you !! well dun .
Palmer Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 5:16 AM
thank you very much MONA,honored
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December 5, 2012 at 7:20 PM
At times I think I have met some Aliens right here on earth. Fun poem Richard. Good luck with your intergalactic quest. So far us earthlings are digging the writes.
Palmer Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 7:18 AM
lol lol,thanks much Richard,keep digging got a lot more buried
Carrillo Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 9:00 AM
Very good Richard I like it. Thanks for sharing. Lucy
Palmer Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 9:27 AM
you are welcome girl,thank you Lucilla
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September 3, 2012 at 11:15 AM
I wish I could write like you do. But, English is not my native language. It usually takes me a day to write a poem in English. You are a very lucky and talented man. The last verse is so beautiful. In fact, the whole poem is beautiful.
Palmer Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 7:30 AM
thank you very much,blushing,you didn't post the country you are from,maybe I could give you a few tips,lol,oxox Vesna
Evans Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 11:40 AM
Short and great.. made me smile
Palmer Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 12:03 PM
THANKS HAPPY TO MAKE YOU HAPPY
Grier Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 11:30 AM
I think that's what we all want. I never thought about the aliens though. I hope they enjoy this as much as I did lol.
Palmer Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 1:35 PM
thanks much Angelica
Castro Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 7:02 PM
Nice flow dreams my favorite things : )
Palmer Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 7:25 PM
thanks much Carmen
Smith Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 5:38 PM
Thats great! I think thats a dream we all have. You put it into words very well!
Palmer Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 5:35 PM
thank you Joanna
Kearley Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 8:34 PM
Ha,ha...I love that last verse...Well the whole thing is great..But the last verse gave me a smile. :o)
Palmer Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 10:37 PM
thanks for the laugh,Dan
Situation Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 7:32 PM
yeah , i gotta dream too.
Palmer Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 5:38 PM
thanks Situation,dream on friend
Susan Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 9:47 AM
although this is not a tail rhyme, it is very good! Really enjoyed this entertaining piece - can picture the aliens now...lol :)
Palmer Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 11:08 AM
thanks BES,corrected it
Singleton Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 3:45 PM
Yes they reach all the way to Australia Richard & it is a delight reading them :)
Palmer Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 9:29 AM
thank you much,Kerry,Australia wow,lol
Kendrick Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 5:51 AM
Great dream..Need meaty content if those aliens will read your work..Sara
Palmer Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 6:34 AM
thanks Sara,hahaha
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July 14, 2012 at 8:48 PM
I like the way you think! I can picture aliens reading your poems.....well done!
Palmer Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 9:16 PM
thanks Cecillia,like your mind too
Onclaud Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 2:02 PM
lovely flow of rhyme and really darn subject which put me under a spell, richard... so many stars glow for you!..:) huggs!
Palmer Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 9:15 PM
snapped my fingers hope it brought you back,lol,thanks Nette
Sweetheart Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 1:48 PM
wonderful rhyme Richard in grandiose thought pattern with a twist with the aliens luv.. hope u check out my new contest just posted..
Palmer Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 9:13 PM
ok,gonna give it a shot Sweetheart,thanks
Gooden Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 1:34 PM
Hey Richard! I'm one of those near, reading your poems and enjoying. Love this one.
Palmer Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 9:12 PM
lol,very near,thanks Sherese
Nair Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 10:05 AM
Wish your desire gets fulfilled. nice work!! Jag
Palmer Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 9:10 PM
thanks Jag,hope so too
Dietrich Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 1:15 PM
A cool poem about your poems!! that last stanza very original one, Richard!
Palmer Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 8:57 AM
thanks Andrea,poetry is my passion......
Sanderson Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 12:45 PM
Mi love di mind, of a man who can express, I will set you free, and lock yuh way in mi heart. And nurse yuh back to health sipping wine with aliens nameless stars... Great write richie!!!! XoxO
Palmer Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 8:56 AM
thanks Carma,you can lock me anytime,lol
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