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My Poem Submission

my poem submission her strong arms she forced me into corners my own admission her permission allows me to move what an love of an groove dance with me here beyond moonbeams catching star lit fireflies dance with me in love kiss me here high flow recognition my poem submission ?

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Maria Williams

Date: 12/25/2017 9:08:00 PM

Another very good poem, but odd, you don't seem to be getting views or comments? Why dont you become a premium member, then PS promotes the poems a bit better for you....Maria

Pipping Stars
Date: 12/26/2017 6:30:00 AM

hello Maria ... we are premium members of the love tribe ... what are views or comments in love ... what is a love comment ... what is a view or comment ... our words travel with our love ... never could a member detatch from me once stretched ... do we write for recognition ... why would i want to pay for a membership ... that seems kind of odd to me ... i recognize that my art words and thoughts have been recognized thrughout the poetical cybers ... hello poetry sites have been created in my honor ... however they will refuse to give me recognition ... they are self seekers ... they ... they ... they ... i write for me myself and i ... they can have it ... we have always owned it ... always ... we are more than mothers wombed etching ...