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my poem brushing its teeth in acid swallow another pill intoxication of an words will sunk tank held me under this vacuuming blows me an affection being less effective my poem has harsh winter breath death turns its nostrils to breathe believe my poem kissed me my eyelids close on dreams screams are coloured smiles miles on miles of scar tissue unraveling them all saturns rings fall an taller my poem strong backed poem met me in the alley think as you read my poem ?
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December 28, 2017 at 1:00 PM
Well, I know I did not see this one before, but I enjoyed its imagery. Why do you put a ? at the bottom? I know I've read your poems before because of that!! Let me go to your very first one. Often i have commented on a person's first poem!
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