Kirstie Fontes Poet Lyric

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FYI - this is written in song from. It may not lay out well as a poem, but touches my heart through song. This is true life to me, all of my poems are.

My Plea

If I was a woman
Tied up in chains
Would I lie there and take it
Or would I fight till the end.

See I am a woman
I fall again and again
Not always but my hand
But I always avenge

But this… time.. I’m tired
My whole life, has been a fight
I keep rising from those.. ashes
They say I’m stronger in life,
But this time I’m tired
And I want to give in.
Cuz this time I’m tired……
Please God…..
Let me give in
Please God,..
let  me   give   in.

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March 10, 2014 at 2:40 AM please help me to make poetry

Carly Larkin January 12, 2014 at 7:54 PM though this poem made me feel sad, it did very much invoke emotions in me, and that's when you know you have a good poem. great job!

Manel Gunatillake May 18, 2013 at 2:55 AM Sad feeling. Beautiful lyrics for a song. A woman ultimately give in. It is mostly the nature. I prefer you when you are strong and avenge Love and hugs

Funom Makama June 11, 2012 at 3:53 AM This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Painted Hunter May 24, 2012 at 1:18 PM I see the feeling in this. I can see it isn't dark just for the sake of being dark...it has pain in it. I like it...

Joann Grisetti May 23, 2012 at 6:07 PM Please do not give in. It will be better it time. Kirstie Fontes May 24, 2012 at 11:47 AM That's what everyone keeps saying, but I've yet to see the better side. Trust me, read my other poetry. But thanks. And I truly mean that!! :'(

Kirstie Fontes May 23, 2012 at 5:46 PM This was actually written as a song, thus why the symmetry is a bit off. Thanks for your encouragement. <3

Pace Ink-U-Script May 23, 2012 at 4:28 PM Yikes..it will get better..well written poem here Kirstie!! Kirstie Fontes May 24, 2012 at 11:49 AM Thank you. The only way I know how to write is trough true lifes experiences. My pain is written in words....

Anne-Lise Andresen May 23, 2012 at 2:54 PM Well written, wish you all the best. - oxox Anne-Lise Kirstie Fontes May 24, 2012 at 11:49 AM Thank You