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FYI - this is written in song from. It may not lay out well as a poem, but touches my heart through song. This is true life to me, all of my poems are.

If I was a woman
Tied up in chains
Would I lie there and take it
Or would I fight till the end.

See I am a woman
I fall again and again
Not always but my hand
But I always avenge

But this… time.. I’m tired
My whole life, has been a fight
I keep rising from those.. ashes
They say I’m stronger in life,
But this time I’m tired
And I want to give in.
Cuz this time I’m tired……
Please God…..
Let me give in
Please God,..
let  me   give   in.

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Date: 3/10/2014 2:40:00 AM

please help me to make poetry

Carly Larkin

Date: 1/12/2014 7:54:00 PM

though this poem made me feel sad, it did very much invoke emotions in me, and that's when you know you have a good poem. great job!

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 5/18/2013 2:55:00 AM

Sad feeling. Beautiful lyrics for a song. A woman ultimately give in. It is mostly the nature. I prefer you when you are strong and avenge Love and hugs