My Pick Up Line

This is a pick up line that I use regularly to pick up girls.
"Damn, those must be space pants you're wearing 
cause your butt's out of this world!"
I must admit that I'm in total dismay.
That line has proven unsuccessful to this very day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 10, 2011 at 4:06 AM
That's funny! X Lizzie
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