My Pet Dinosaur

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~My Pet Dinosaur~ (A children's poem) I have a dinasour for a pet He likes to eat all he can get Prefers plants more than meats He loves insects, dislikes bats The other day I took him to school He had a great time it was so cool My friends of him were afraid Because his big teeth he displayed I'm so glad he came with me But my teacher did not agree She had plants over the wall And my dinasour ate them all. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2010 January.13.2016

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Legendary Legend

Date: 1/14/2016 6:56:00 AM

very lovely.....

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/14/2016 4:48:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Legendary Legend,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I deeply appreciate it:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/14/2016 5:11:00 AM

Beautiful poem for children my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/14/2016 4:47:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly BL,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I deeply appreciate it:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

White Sage

Date: 1/13/2016 5:49:00 PM

amusing, amazing and well written words...excellent write Dorian...I guess pet dinosaur won't go to school

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/14/2016 4:42:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly WS,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I deeply appreciate it. No,I'm afraid that he can't anymore,White Sage.He's too dangerous to plants and walls.Lol.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D