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My Perfect World

Do I envision one world free, of hurtful, senseless bigotry? where people you see with their success won't fill you with envy and leave you less and food you eat your babies too were made with love not shareholder value the pieces of earth we use and abuse will one day be seated on their royal berth the grass is greener without a fence to brighten the prairie, chemical less so join me now brothers and sisters lend me your ear I'll show you how, with three simple words I do decree, In God's Trust His Will be freed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/13/2009 1:38:00 PM
Yes, Jim In God We Trust! Some powerful and truth rhyming verses here my friend.
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Date: 7/12/2009 10:06:00 PM
all the verses here are as true as the holy bible--bravo Jim and yes God is our only trust--He will concede--and hope you are ok JIMBO;)--CHARMA
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Date: 7/12/2009 8:44:00 PM
i really like this one. great job
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Date: 7/12/2009 3:56:00 PM
Ha! I like this one, James, Really a good flow and story too! I like this one better than the rest!Moses
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Date: 7/12/2009 3:00:00 PM
I agree. The truth can be told in wonderous ways
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Date: 7/12/2009 2:37:00 PM
Nice flow and message...Raul
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Date: 7/12/2009 1:18:00 PM
I like your Rhyme. Sara
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