My Perfect Hell

I'm no angel!
I know that
But why say I can't be perfect?
I know I've made some mistakes in my life
Everyone has
Isn't that what human is?
Sometimes I wish I could take back the things I did
So I can be perfect
But I can't
But why does that mean I'm imperfect?
What is perfection but imperfection?
In that case there is no needs fr perfectin or imperfection
we would all be obsolite.
Ain't that a *****?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 11/28/2008 4:08:00 PM
Are you ever gonna come up here and visit me and tell me the honest to god truth?
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Date: 11/28/2008 3:37:00 PM
I wish I could see you :( And I wuv you too
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Date: 11/28/2008 3:32:00 PM
I love you SOOOOOOO much!!!!!! Now tell me the real reason why you wanted to go back out with me? :)
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Date: 11/28/2008 3:26:00 PM
I Wuv You!!! ;) Can you stay online when you get off the phone
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Date: 11/28/2008 3:24:00 PM
I Love You! ;D why did you decide to go back out with me?
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Date: 11/28/2008 3:22:00 PM
I love you but I feel awkward talking to you on the phone cause of the last inccident that happen last time. . . Sorry :(
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Date: 11/28/2008 3:18:00 PM
Why? Now I feel awkward. . .
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Date: 11/28/2008 3:12:00 PM
Do you seriously want to go back out with me cause you're kinda not actin like it
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Date: 11/26/2008 10:06:00 PM
Love You Bye! :)
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Date: 11/26/2008 9:55:00 PM
Umm sure. 1-719-573-6691. But dont call yet because that is my house phone.
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Date: 11/26/2008 9:50:00 PM
HaHaHa!! I love it!! Hey can you give me your number then I'll write it down then you can erase it afterwards?
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