My Perfect Day

What would be the most perfect day?
       What would bring me the most joy?
The very first thing I’d have to say,
          is bringing back to life my sweet little boy. 
I’d give him back his favorite train toy. 

        We would stroll hand and hand on a walk,
pet our dog Bo who would still be alive-
              Maybe it would be the day he’d learn to talk, 
oh, if only my sweet boy had survived…
  a perfect day would be contrived. 

       The perfect day would be in Autumn, 
we would play hopscotch and ball-
          I’d pray that good fun I taught him, 
then in the leaves he would amusingly fall.
  I wonder if he’d grow to be tall?

I’d make him his favorite meal, rice cereal, 
         hear him laugh and giggle with delight-
I need nothing bought or of material, 
just to tuck him in gently at night.
   Oh, what a beautiful and miraculous sight. 

   My perfect day would be complete, 
as I kiss him tenderly on his head-
         I’d tickle his innocent hands and feet, 
and whisper, “I love you” in bed. 
                                     Now it’s tomorrow that I dread.



The Perfect Day Contest
November 30th, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 9:30 PM
Have to come back to congratulate you. Awesome, Laura!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 1:40 PM
Oh so sad...oh how beautiful! Hug those loves ones tight! Congrats on your top win, Luloo! <3
Williams Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 12:15 PM
Wow, Laura, I really admire the way you deal with a tragedy in such a courageous, loving, and tender way in your poem. I am very happy to see your touching piece right at the top. Congratulations, and thank you so much for sharing. All my very best to you and yours. :) Bartholomew
Talbot Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 6:20 AM
Wow, that brought a lump to my throat, very sad, but a beautiful poem. Congrats on your well deserved to win!
Roper Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 8:31 PM
Awesome write, Laura, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Raynes Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 6:57 PM
wow, this is so heartfelt, so beautiful, so sad, I loved every bit of this write, I did not expect it and u took me on such an emotional ride. wow
Gauthier Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 12:21 PM
O Laura, what an emotional read. A FAVE for sure.
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November 29, 2017 at 8:03 AM
awww sounds like a lovely day... I enjoy days like this with my wife... so relaxing and peaceful..
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