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My Pen © Ben Burton 1-08-2015 She was young and beautiful I was hung and comical Hung with humor found a way to beauty's heart Though I was never lyrical That undisputed miracle Inspired my pen to challenge Shelley's art Life with her was glorious Straight out of a storybook Where forever would not be half long enough Rode the waves at Malibu Skied the slopes of Crested Butte Stayed at home for days on end just making love For six years I have known such pain and sorrow Since the final, sad "Goodbye" I gave my wife Now these tears you see me shedding are all borrowed From the deep well where my heart was drowned that night Though I'm still a youthful man I will never love again The only poems left in my pen Are filled with anger, grief and spite

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Date: 1/9/2015 1:10:00 PM
Turned out well though...Excellent piece of prose!! :) john.
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Date: 1/9/2015 3:56:00 PM
Uhhh... Thanks?
Date: 1/8/2015 9:20:00 PM
:( wow, that has so much emotion in it. i want to cry, and hug you, and praise your poetry.
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Date: 1/9/2015 8:43:00 AM
Strangest thing, Cas, this started as a love poem, but I was so cold and typing with gloves on that I detoured to end it more quickly! Thanks so much for your warm words. Regards, Ben.
Date: 1/8/2015 7:07:00 PM
Well, dear Dorian, I am not certain what a "7" connotes, but I trust it is lucky! Thank you, dear heart.
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Date: 1/8/2015 6:33:00 PM
Excellent pen Ben! I really enjoyed your piece my dearest friend! A 7 from me! I wish you a very Happy New Year! I pray that 2015 brings just the best to you! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D."
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