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My Pen

My pen bleeds through ink veins My pen tells truth that stains My pen kills hopes and dreams My pen swims in malign streams My pen ignites flames at night My pen explodes like lethal dynamite My pen swallows anti-depressant pills My pen displays my poetic skills My pen lives, faint hearts cry My pen dies, so do I

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/17/2010 9:16:00 PM
I'll tell you, that was quite riveting. I just have one comment, it seems a bit forced at times because the flow gets mixed up in the syllables. Other than that, I thoroughly enjoyed! Keep it up!
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