Alan Luty Poet Rhyme

My Peaceful Soul

My peaceful soul

You come to see me looking at my glossy stone with a silver grain I see your loneliness I feel your pain.
I can sense your body is still so full of hurt exactly the same as the day my casket and body succumbed to the dirt.
With a little help, you will move on someday and I will see you smile and your pain will become less.
Then in time, you will be ready and think your life isn`t such a mess.
I know in your memory you will hold the love we had with absolutely no regret, and for that, my soul is forever in your debt.
I long to see you brighter and happier and give your heart elsewhere or at least a little piece then my soul will watch over you forever in restful peace.

original by 
Alan Luty

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Beata Agustin September 23, 2025 at 6:10 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Paul Bell August 28, 2021 at 9:40 AM I think I would like if someone was looking down, wishing me well. Time looks after us all in our hour of need.