My Patience For Your Love

I breath, I break, I go to sleep, I wake./My love is never ending but it tortures me to the 
point where my life is pending/ on the brink of complete happiness or just a complete mess/ 
I'll wait for u my love until I take my last breath. /It's not like I have choice/ we are soul 
mates/ so therefor I am desighned to love u better/on the brightest sunny days or through 
the worst stormy weather./Fate can't keep us apart because god knows we belong 
together./there's an invisible wall u built that I've broken through before but then someone 
else comes along and tries to unsuccessfully shut that open door/ in front of me that leads to 
you when all the while I'm trying, trying, trying my hardest to break it down until there is a 
barrier no more/

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/7/2010 11:38:00 AM
really nice rhythm and flow with words that dance upon the reader. You captured me with this somber taste of life. - kudos - Alan
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Date: 6/7/2010 8:59:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kara. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2010 7:49:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family.. so enjoyed your creative write.. did u forget to include your title for us to view? with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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