My Past

MY PAST Millions of emotions attended as I walk to bury my past.

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Weeping Willow

Date: 5/4/2016 7:54:00 AM

Walking is hard.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/14/2011 10:05:00 AM

I really like what you say here, Dalila, so true and also very thought provoking :D-- and thank you very much for passing by my blog, really appreciate it and you are too kind with what you said, thank you :D keep on writing and I think it would also be very interesting if you put up a blog, even host a contest? Enjoy your day!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/12/2011 8:06:00 PM

Profound and deeply meaninful expression on life, Dalila

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/12/2011 5:41:00 PM

Well said, Dalila. Many of us try to bury the past. Good monoku! Best wishes, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/12/2011 4:14:00 PM

super creative is all I can say Dalila.. a vivid picture painted with precious words luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/12/2011 3:11:00 AM

Great one..Sad though we can't do that..It is ever constant with us..It can make us better or bring us down and that is our choice to learn become better or keep doing the same things with our lives...Enjoyed reading this morning...Thanks for the kind and understanding review of my work..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/12/2011 1:43:00 AM

oh my, dalila! what a perfect display of personification... i am floored!would be so nice to connect with you when you come over! :) huggs, nette

Crystal Wilkins

Date: 6/12/2011 12:28:00 AM

the past is a tangle of emotions... brilliant write look forward to reading more of your work