My Past

MY PAST

Millions of emotions attended as I walk to bury my past.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Willow Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 7:54 AM
Walking is hard.
K. Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 10:05 AM
I really like what you say here, Dalila, so true and also very thought provoking :D-- and thank you very much for passing by my blog, really appreciate it and you are too kind with what you said, thank you :D keep on writing and I think it would also be very interesting if you put up a blog, even host a contest? Enjoy your day!
Mehta Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 8:06 PM
Profound and deeply meaninful expression on life, Dalila
Devonshire Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 5:41 PM
Well said, Dalila. Many of us try to bury the past. Good monoku! Best wishes, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 4:14 PM
super creative is all I can say Dalila.. a vivid picture painted with precious words luv..
Kendrick Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 3:11 AM
Great one..Sad though we can't do that..It is ever constant with us..It can make us better or bring us down and that is our choice to learn become better or keep doing the same things with our lives...Enjoyed reading this morning...Thanks for the kind and understanding review of my work..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 1:43 AM
oh my, dalila! what a perfect display of personification... i am floored!would be so nice to connect with you when you come over! :) huggs, nette
Wilkins Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 12:28 AM
the past is a tangle of emotions... brilliant write look forward to reading more of your work
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