My Paper Plane

A tree you once were
Now a remarkable tool
Will you be my dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Cantu Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 12:09 AM
Hey, this was playful and fun xD jojojojo nice last line, indeed it is curious how everything is transformable @.@ thanks for the experience=D=D and for the comments
Poe Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 7:47 PM
Brillant! -Always your Alley
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June 4, 2009 at 7:38 PM
I really enjoyed this. It jumps so rapidly from one state of existence to another, it works so well. It's almost parellel to what it's all about. Like from the ground, rising and then off. Amazing ^^ Nathaniel
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June 4, 2009 at 4:38 PM
i love all kind of planes,even paper planes,they still can fly--the plane--the flying bird------beauty--charma
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June 4, 2009 at 3:43 PM
IT CAN TAKE YOU ANY WHERE YOU WANNA GO LITTLE BROTHER
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