My Painted World

The day goes dark but not black,
With undefined twilight blinking through the night
        the beacons of hope,ambience of peace
       Gloomy hope with cyan coloured mind
              walking on brown sandy beach
     as ripples of love cover the dark blue sea
        Magenta thrush sings beautiful lyrics
            which makes the violet herons
         to hover round the littoral zone
       As I settle on an amber camp bed
       beside my Orange skinned lover
            She was lost in thought
        as the breeze whistles along
Which makes my affection so strong
    I look at her and her scarlet cap
      and feel like giving her a tap
She makes my world go round and round
      In her,plenty pleasures abound
With these feelings I fell into a trance
    Even if I am not full of exuberance
I `ve seen my world surrounded by green fields with purple hibiscus
The white sun shines with great intensity
Which makes the red rose to bloom in the yellow garden of bliss
                This world I float in  is...
more precious and golden to me than pink diamond.



CONTEST:'Paint the World' sponsored by Tracie~indigo Dreamweaver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 5:25 PM
Olusegun, A belated congrats on your colorful win! I enjoyed your vivid, passionate twilight! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Brown Avatar
July 27, 2012 at 1:39 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Paint The World" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
July 27, 2012 at 9:21 AM
It feels as if I'm in your world, seeing with your eyes the beauty more precious than diamonds! Thank you for that!
Merryman Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 6:48 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win, Olusegun! Nicely done! Love, Kim
Guzzi Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 2:44 PM
Some very good free verse in there perhaps the rhyme is best left out? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 9:16 AM
congrats Olusegun on a remarkable write and win so colorful luv.. hope u r having a super day..
Williams Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 4:41 AM
Olusegun congrats on your win, I like the sound of your world..David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 3:17 AM
Beautiful Arowolo, congratulations on your win xx
Horne Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 10:36 AM
what a beautiful piece. Congrats on all your wins : )
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 11:16 PM
wow, you painted great artistry! I think you did your very best with this one, my friend.
Song Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 3:45 PM
You are completely ensnared by this beauty and caught up in the emotions of the moment....lovely colors and images in this contest entry...so nice to read this, Olusegun. All is well in my neck of the woods! gwendolen
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