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My Painted World

The day goes dark but not black, With undefined twilight blinking through the night the beacons of hope,ambience of peace Gloomy hope with cyan coloured mind walking on brown sandy beach as ripples of love cover the dark blue sea Magenta thrush sings beautiful lyrics which makes the violet herons to hover round the littoral zone As I settle on an amber camp bed beside my Orange skinned lover She was lost in thought as the breeze whistles along Which makes my affection so strong I look at her and her scarlet cap and feel like giving her a tap She makes my world go round and round In her,plenty pleasures abound With these feelings I fell into a trance Even if I am not full of exuberance I `ve seen my world surrounded by green fields with purple hibiscus The white sun shines with great intensity Which makes the red rose to bloom in the yellow garden of bliss This world I float in is... more precious and golden to me than pink diamond. CONTEST:'Paint the World' sponsored by Tracie~indigo Dreamweaver

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Date: 7/29/2012 5:25:00 PM
Olusegun, A belated congrats on your colorful win! I enjoyed your vivid, passionate twilight! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/27/2012 1:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Paint The World" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2012 9:21:00 AM
It feels as if I'm in your world, seeing with your eyes the beauty more precious than diamonds! Thank you for that!
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Date: 7/26/2012 6:48:00 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win, Olusegun! Nicely done! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/26/2012 2:44:00 PM
Some very good free verse in there perhaps the rhyme is best left out? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/26/2012 9:16:00 AM
congrats Olusegun on a remarkable write and win so colorful luv.. hope u r having a super day..
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Date: 7/26/2012 4:41:00 AM
Olusegun congrats on your win, I like the sound of your world..David
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Date: 7/26/2012 3:17:00 AM
Beautiful Arowolo, congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 7/21/2012 10:36:00 AM
what a beautiful piece. Congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 7/18/2012 11:16:00 PM
wow, you painted great artistry! I think you did your very best with this one, my friend.
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Date: 7/17/2012 3:45:00 PM
You are completely ensnared by this beauty and caught up in the emotions of the moment....lovely colors and images in this contest entry...so nice to read this, Olusegun. All is well in my neck of the woods! gwendolen
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