John Aaron Green Poet Rhyme

My Pain

For in my burden i cry,

its depression can only lie.

  My failure is just my flaw,

a side affect from the law.

  My anger is at my pain,

to hinder me of my reign.

  For i am a chosen one,

a believer of our Gods son.

  So try to slow me down,

for in him always a crown.

  His faith is forever in me,

his vengence is what you'll see.

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Elizabeth Wesley October 23, 2012 at 2:50 PM I guess by now we know that pain is an integral part of life. It hollows us out to hopefully be filled with something better. Would love to think your life is coming back together John. Love, Elizabeth

Poet Destroyer A June 17, 2012 at 6:17 AM Good morning ,John..stopping by to greet you with a happy fathers day.... God bless..pd

Cory Long December 26, 2011 at 11:28 AM this was beautiful.. cory

Gwendolen Song December 7, 2011 at 9:23 AM You have the confidence of your Savior, John...so strong the words of your spirit. Some days I feel more spiritual than others...He is the same today, tomorrow, and 4ever though. I love that the most. ....Jack is ACTUALLY JESUS...now go RE-READ the poem...silly! Gwendolen John Aaron Green December 7, 2011 at 9:54 AM thank you gwen,,,i wish everyone knew the authority we have in him.............

Andrea Dietrich December 5, 2011 at 8:48 PM I liked the line about anger at your pain. I have that anger too with new pain I'm experiencing. But we all need to realize we are chosen sons and daughters of God and to have faith! Gwendolen Song December 7, 2011 at 9:21 AM great truth-- :)

Red Fiery November 30, 2011 at 11:58 AM your words are so beautiful here john ! I always enjoyed reading ur poems...ur words have a beautiful and divine connection with the lord !

Dan Kearley November 7, 2011 at 6:48 PM I really liked this one. I could feel the faith you have.Nice write.

Lisa Cooper November 7, 2011 at 10:36 AM thank you for your compliment, *blushes* I enjoy your poetry as well. very well penned

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 6, 2011 at 8:05 AM u are so kind John to read my poetry and leave sweet encouraging comments my friend.. always anxious to read your dynamic words also.. creativity is the spark to glorify God who has given us our gift of poetry luv.. happy Sunday...

Carol Eastman November 4, 2011 at 10:37 AM You might like my poems "One Wish" and "Blind Ambition".

Carol Eastman November 4, 2011 at 10:26 AM Your strength and determination show well here in this poem.

Rosalyn Lampkin October 29, 2011 at 8:23 PM I like the entire write, but, these lnes are very powerful....My failure is just my flaw.... My anger is at my pain..for in him always a crown....very powerful lines.

Jslambert Mister Roboto October 29, 2011 at 4:06 AM do your THANG bro!

Elizabeth Wesley October 28, 2011 at 12:34 PM Sos true. so special John. I love how your faith shines through your verse. An inspiration to all of us my friend. :)

Anne Rutherford October 27, 2011 at 11:34 AM John so good to read your work again!! Uplifting as always. I can identify with your line 'My anger is at my pain, to hinder me of my reign'. I was angry and realized not at anyone ,just the pain . And said ,He doesn't give more than I can handle. Wonderful message here! Anne

Poet Destroyer A October 25, 2011 at 8:50 AM My failure is just my flaw,~~ <--- I love this line... I wish, I could go on all day,, with that in my mind... I love your ending as well... I'm glad you know how to handle pain.. God bless you,..p.d

Dan Kearley October 21, 2011 at 9:22 PM Very nice!