Andrea Trudeau Poet Prose Poetry

My Pain

blood drips down
locked the door
the stinging starts to fade
everything becomes a blur
i know lay in the tub
in the cold water
my my arms stings
then the pain fades
i go under hopping not to come back up for air
and i feel my body going numb
i open my mouth to get a water in and blood
i tell myself to stay under
and then everything fads away
no more pain
my heart stops
the pain leaves me
my dead body is in the tub
TO NEVER BE FOUND AGAIN
untill someone starts looking for me
when they find my body
it will be to late

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Sierra Biersack June 16, 2011 at 11:21 AM This is soo deeply written boo. Have you ever felt that as if you wanted it to happen so bad you almost had to try it? I almost tried it before. Shh its a secret thoo

Carol Sunshine Brown June 14, 2011 at 6:27 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Andrea. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol