My Pain

It is okay to scared, When I live in the tears I was reared, For my feelings, no one cared, As at transparency I stared, Judgement are so unfair, Sinking,they drown me in despair, As I fail to pay discrimination's fare , The happiness that I seek is truly rare,

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Ingibo Benson

Date: 6/22/2011 9:24:00 PM

There is so much pain in the world, every one has his own man or wife. It's a good way of expressing your feel and experiences in life. Nice work.

Ingibo Benson

Date: 6/22/2011 9:18:00 PM

There is so much pain in the world, every one has his own man or wife. It's a good way of expressing your feel and experiences in life. Nice work.

Ingibo Benson

Date: 6/22/2011 9:17:00 PM

There is so much pain in the world, every one has his own man or wife. It's a good way of expressing your feel and experiences in life. Nice work.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/24/2009 3:34:00 AM

Nicely written Rhyme revealing the emotions that one has about life. Keep writing. Sara