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My Own Sky

in my changeless sky clouds of thoughts are passing by - sun shining the gist

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Pratap Roy

Date: 10/31/2021 7:49:00 PM

Appreciate your imagination. Nicely penned. God bless you.

FJ Thomas

Date: 12/2/2020 3:48:00 PM

So lovely Jenish :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2020 8:09:00 PM

very nice, Jenish. Great metaphor!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/9/2020 11:30:00 PM

Thank you Andrea..

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/9/2020 9:21:00 AM

That "gist" is a glaring obvious...Nice Haiku

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/9/2020 11:30:00 PM

Thank you Arturo..

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/9/2020 8:42:00 AM

Love the idea O'D a changeless sky belonging to you Panagiota xx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/9/2020 11:29:00 PM

Thank you Panagiota for your kind support..

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 7/8/2020 11:52:00 PM

Both Senryu and picture are great, very dramatic (Your thoughts are priceless Jenish.) Take care...Shirley

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/9/2020 12:40:00 AM

Thank you Shirley for your delightful comment.. Have a great day...

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/8/2020 8:48:00 AM

Brilliant imagery here, Jenish, wish your clouds of thoughts would rain more words:)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/8/2020 8:55:00 AM

Thank you Jo for those delightful words..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/7/2020 6:39:00 PM

'clouds of thought are passing by' -- two thumbs up, Jenish. Lovely line! Cheers, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/7/2020 11:38:00 PM

Thank you Gershon for your kind support..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/7/2020 2:29:00 PM

I hope they are pleasant thoughts Jenish, we all need sunshine in our lives? Tom

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/7/2020 11:38:00 PM

Thank you Tom.. Have a great day..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/7/2020 7:10:00 AM

Profound dearest, Jenish. Wonderful photo! Blessings.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/7/2020 7:47:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/7/2020 6:55:00 AM

Feels deep in melancholy moments--your photo says it all, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/7/2020 7:47:00 AM

Thank you Vijay..