My Own Sky

in my changeless sky clouds of thoughts are passing by - sun shining the gist
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Roy Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 7:49 PM
Appreciate your imagination. Nicely penned. God bless you.
Thomas Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 3:48 PM
So lovely Jenish :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 8:09 PM
very nice, Jenish. Great metaphor!
Somadas Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 11:30 PM
Thank you Andrea..
Michael Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 9:21 AM
That "gist" is a glaring obvious...Nice Haiku
Somadas Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 11:30 PM
Thank you Arturo..
Romios Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 8:42 AM
Love the idea O'D a changeless sky belonging to you Panagiota xx
Somadas Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 11:29 PM
Thank you Panagiota for your kind support..
Hawkins Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 11:52 PM
Both Senryu and picture are great, very dramatic (Your thoughts are priceless Jenish.) Take care...Shirley
Somadas Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 12:40 AM
Thank you Shirley for your delightful comment.. Have a great day...
Daniel Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 8:48 AM
Brilliant imagery here, Jenish, wish your clouds of thoughts would rain more words:)
Somadas Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 8:55 AM
Thank you Jo for those delightful words..
Wolf Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 6:39 PM
'clouds of thought are passing by' -- two thumbs up, Jenish. Lovely line! Cheers, Gershon
Somadas Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 11:38 PM
Thank you Gershon for your kind support..
Cunningham Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 2:29 PM
I hope they are pleasant thoughts Jenish, we all need sunshine in our lives? Tom
Somadas Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 11:38 PM
Thank you Tom.. Have a great day..
Trifiatis Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 7:10 AM
Profound dearest, Jenish. Wonderful photo! Blessings.
Somadas Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 7:47 AM
Thank you Demetrios..
Pandit Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 6:55 AM
Feels deep in melancholy moments--your photo says it all, Jenish.
Somadas Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 7:47 AM
Thank you Vijay..
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