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My own proverb

My own proverb...... “Your life will be pleasant or enjoyable, if you chose to live a simple life Your life might become flawed or struggles when you are beginning to show others who and what you are". Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2016 Ravi Sathasivam

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Date: 12/5/2016 6:42:00 AM
Excellent haiku my friend. Cleverly done. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/30/2016 3:31:00 PM
yes, with time, things become better as we go toward perfection. I prefer the simple life too, Ravi
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Date: 12/5/2016 5:50:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend Andrea. Appreciated. Hugs
Date: 11/30/2016 9:56:00 AM
Very accurate observations dear, Ravi!
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Date: 12/5/2016 5:50:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 11/29/2016 1:36:00 PM
A simple life certainly is the way to go. Great proverb :)
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Date: 12/5/2016 5:51:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 11/29/2016 11:58:00 AM
I agree with you, Ravi; I have always worked hard, but lived a simple life...less problems to deal with! Regards // paul
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Date: 12/5/2016 5:51:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 11/29/2016 7:15:00 AM
Good one..Enjoyed reading it..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/5/2016 5:51:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 11/29/2016 5:31:00 AM
Very true ... those who go by this proverb are sure to be happy ... great ...
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Date: 12/5/2016 5:51:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 11/29/2016 3:11:00 AM
- So true ... be happy ... gold can not be eaten :) - Great written, my friend Ravi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 12/5/2016 5:54:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend Anne. Appreciated. Love and hugs xxxx.
Date: 11/29/2016 2:59:00 AM
I totally agree with Victor. If you put your mate before yourself, they will do the same for you, if you have true love. 7 ; )
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Date: 12/5/2016 5:55:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.