Ravi Sathasivam Poet Haiku

My Own Proverb

My own proverb......

“Your life will be pleasant or enjoyable, if  you chose to live a simple life
Your life might become flawed or struggles when you are beginning to show others who and what you are".

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Andrea Dietrich November 30, 2016 at 3:31 PM yes, with time, things become better as we go toward perfection. I prefer the simple life too, Ravi Ravi Sathasivam December 5, 2016 at 5:50 AM Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend Andrea. Appreciated. Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis November 30, 2016 at 9:56 AM Very accurate observations dear, Ravi! Ravi Sathasivam December 5, 2016 at 5:50 AM Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.

Carol B. November 29, 2016 at 1:36 PM A simple life certainly is the way to go. Great proverb :) Ravi Sathasivam December 5, 2016 at 5:51 AM Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.

Paul Callus November 29, 2016 at 11:58 AM I agree with you, Ravi; I have always worked hard, but lived a simple life...less problems to deal with! Regards // paul Ravi Sathasivam December 5, 2016 at 5:51 AM Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.

Sara Kendrick November 29, 2016 at 7:15 AM Good one..Enjoyed reading it..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Ravi Sathasivam December 5, 2016 at 5:51 AM Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.

Probir Gupta November 29, 2016 at 5:31 AM Very true ... those who go by this proverb are sure to be happy ... great ... Ravi Sathasivam December 5, 2016 at 5:51 AM Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 29, 2016 at 3:11 AM - So true ... be happy ... gold can not be eaten :) - Great written, my friend Ravi - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Ravi Sathasivam December 5, 2016 at 5:54 AM Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend Anne. Appreciated. Love and hugs xxxx.

Connie Marcum Wong November 29, 2016 at 2:59 AM I totally agree with Victor. If you put your mate before yourself, they will do the same for you, if you have true love. 7 ; ) Ravi Sathasivam December 5, 2016 at 5:55 AM Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.