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My Own Proverb

My own proverb......


"When the beautiful love forcefully taken over by the lust,
Causing damages to the trust of the love".


Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Scott Thirtyseven Date: 10/19/2016 6:47:00 AM Lust and Love, so much fun if you can get the mix just right. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/26/2016 3:54:00 PM A trust that is very hard to repair as well..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanx for dropping by..SK Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 9/26/2016 7:44:00 AM Sadly your words are so true Ravi - an excellent poem:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 9/26/2016 6:53:00 AM so wise Ravi, in this little wonderful Haiku Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/15/2016 9:36:00 PM sadly so true , Ravi. Login to Reply

Kelly Deschler Date: 9/8/2016 7:24:00 PM It is not always so easy to tell the difference between love and passion... But, both can hurt when they go wrong... Great wisdom you share in these lines, Ravi! Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/14/2016 3:39:00 AM thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs Ravi

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/3/2016 4:51:00 PM Everyone is searching for love and trust, but at times lust intervenes and damages that love. Well said Ravi! ; ) 7 Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/14/2016 3:39:00 AM thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs Ravi

Paul Callus Date: 9/1/2016 12:07:00 PM Lust can never be a substitute for love, Ravi, though they can keep each other company! Another good proverb, my friend. Regards // paul Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/14/2016 3:40:00 AM thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Ravi

Joseph May Date: 9/1/2016 9:59:00 AM Lust will always ruin love's beauty...Very good proverb Ravi Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/14/2016 3:41:00 AM thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Ravi

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/1/2016 3:40:00 AM - Very true and exelent written, Ravi - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/14/2016 3:41:00 AM thank you very much for your comment my dear friend Anne. Very much appreciated. Hugs and love Ravi