Ravi Sathasivam Poet Haiku

My Own Proverb

My own proverb......


"When the beautiful love forcefully taken over by the lust,
Causing damages to the trust of the love".


Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Scott Thirtyseven October 19, 2016 at 6:47 AM Lust and Love, so much fun if you can get the mix just right.

Sara Kendrick September 26, 2016 at 3:54 PM A trust that is very hard to repair as well..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanx for dropping by..SK

Jan Allison September 26, 2016 at 7:44 AM Sadly your words are so true Ravi - an excellent poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman September 26, 2016 at 6:53 AM so wise Ravi, in this little wonderful Haiku

Andrea Dietrich September 15, 2016 at 9:36 PM sadly so true , Ravi.

Kelly Deschler September 8, 2016 at 7:24 PM It is not always so easy to tell the difference between love and passion... But, both can hurt when they go wrong... Great wisdom you share in these lines, Ravi! Ravi Sathasivam September 14, 2016 at 3:39 AM thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs Ravi

Connie Marcum Wong September 3, 2016 at 4:51 PM Everyone is searching for love and trust, but at times lust intervenes and damages that love. Well said Ravi! ; ) 7 Ravi Sathasivam September 14, 2016 at 3:39 AM thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs Ravi

Paul Callus September 1, 2016 at 12:07 PM Lust can never be a substitute for love, Ravi, though they can keep each other company! Another good proverb, my friend. Regards // paul Ravi Sathasivam September 14, 2016 at 3:40 AM thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Ravi

Joseph May September 1, 2016 at 9:59 AM Lust will always ruin love's beauty...Very good proverb Ravi Ravi Sathasivam September 14, 2016 at 3:41 AM thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Ravi

Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2016 at 3:40 AM - Very true and exelent written, Ravi - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Ravi Sathasivam September 14, 2016 at 3:41 AM thank you very much for your comment my dear friend Anne. Very much appreciated. Hugs and love Ravi