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My Own Proverb

My own proverb...... "When the beautiful love forcefully taken over by the lust, Causing damages to the trust of the love". Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2016 Ravi Sathasivam

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 10/19/2016 6:47:00 AM

Lust and Love, so much fun if you can get the mix just right.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/26/2016 3:54:00 PM

A trust that is very hard to repair as well..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanx for dropping by..SK

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2016 7:44:00 AM

Sadly your words are so true Ravi - an excellent poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/26/2016 6:53:00 AM

so wise Ravi, in this little wonderful Haiku

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2016 9:36:00 PM

sadly so true , Ravi.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/8/2016 7:24:00 PM

It is not always so easy to tell the difference between love and passion... But, both can hurt when they go wrong... Great wisdom you share in these lines, Ravi!

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/14/2016 3:39:00 AM

thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs Ravi

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/3/2016 4:51:00 PM

Everyone is searching for love and trust, but at times lust intervenes and damages that love. Well said Ravi! ; ) 7

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/14/2016 3:39:00 AM

thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs Ravi

Paul Callus

Date: 9/1/2016 12:07:00 PM

Lust can never be a substitute for love, Ravi, though they can keep each other company! Another good proverb, my friend. Regards // paul

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/14/2016 3:40:00 AM

thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Ravi

Joseph May

Date: 9/1/2016 9:59:00 AM

Lust will always ruin love's beauty...Very good proverb Ravi

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/14/2016 3:41:00 AM

thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Ravi

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2016 3:40:00 AM

- Very true and exelent written, Ravi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/14/2016 3:41:00 AM

thank you very much for your comment my dear friend Anne. Very much appreciated. Hugs and love Ravi