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My own proverb

My own proverb...... "When the beautiful love forcefully taken over by the lust, Causing damages to the trust of the love". Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2016 Ravi Sathasivam

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Date: 10/19/2016 6:47:00 AM
Lust and Love, so much fun if you can get the mix just right.
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Date: 9/26/2016 3:54:00 PM
A trust that is very hard to repair as well..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanx for dropping by..SK
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Date: 9/26/2016 7:44:00 AM
Sadly your words are so true Ravi - an excellent poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/26/2016 6:53:00 AM
so wise Ravi, in this little wonderful Haiku
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Date: 9/15/2016 9:36:00 PM
sadly so true , Ravi.
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Date: 9/8/2016 7:24:00 PM
It is not always so easy to tell the difference between love and passion... But, both can hurt when they go wrong... Great wisdom you share in these lines, Ravi!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/14/2016 3:39:00 AM
thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs Ravi
Date: 9/3/2016 4:51:00 PM
Everyone is searching for love and trust, but at times lust intervenes and damages that love. Well said Ravi! ; ) 7
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Date: 9/14/2016 3:39:00 AM
thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs Ravi
Date: 9/1/2016 12:07:00 PM
Lust can never be a substitute for love, Ravi, though they can keep each other company! Another good proverb, my friend. Regards // paul
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/14/2016 3:40:00 AM
thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Ravi
Date: 9/1/2016 9:59:00 AM
Lust will always ruin love's beauty...Very good proverb Ravi
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Date: 9/14/2016 3:41:00 AM
thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Ravi
Date: 9/1/2016 3:40:00 AM
- Very true and exelent written, Ravi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/14/2016 3:41:00 AM
thank you very much for your comment my dear friend Anne. Very much appreciated. Hugs and love Ravi