My Own Proverb

My own proverb.... 'Children should grow up with discipline, then only they will choose a right path to live in the future' Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2015
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Kendrick Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 7:32 AM
Truth spoken in this one..However, as always some children will rebel against the discipline..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate you reading my work and taking time to comment..Sara
Muideen Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 2:15 PM
A very good and wise write here....excellent..........A.M.
Sathasivam Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 2:35 AM
Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated.
Horsman Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 11:11 AM
ah such wisdom, Ravi.
Sathasivam Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 2:35 AM
Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated.
Sietesantos Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 9:25 AM
Great proverb, a 7! We have to pass on to our children the words they need to guide them into the future! Please accept Happy Birthday wishes from me too! Love and blessings to you, my friend! Pandita
Sathasivam Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 2:36 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated.
Sathasivam Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 2:36 AM
Thank you very much for your wishes. God bless.
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 2:18 AM
- First I have to say: Happy birthday to you dear friend Ravi !!!! (14.10) - // - Thank you for these wise words in your haiku, well written - Best wishes from Norway - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 8:25 AM
Thank you very much for wishes and comment on my poem. Appreciated. Love, hugs and kissesxxxx
Nunez Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 9:34 AM
I agree. Good monoku, Ravi!
Sathasivam Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 2:37 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated.
Callus Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 8:47 AM
I agree with you, Ravi. Parents have a right and a duty to see that their children get a good basis on which to build their future life. ~ Best regards, my friend. // paul
Sathasivam Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 2:37 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 8:20 AM
So true, Ravi. Too many kids are the other way today!!
Sathasivam Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 2:37 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated.
Allison Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 7:43 AM
wise words indeed - I work in a school and can see many on the wrong path at a very early age:-( hugs Jan xx
Sathasivam Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 2:38 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated.
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