My Own Proverb

My own proverb..... Do not search your happiness in the hell. Do not inflate your soul with sins. Do not believe in short term pleasure. Do not harm your inner heart with faults Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved
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Mcdaid Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 5:03 PM
a deep excellent pen ravi wishing you a blessed week pal
Roper Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 9:58 AM
Very good write a 7. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 5:00 AM
- Wise words and well written, Ravi! - I wish you a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 5:49 AM
Thank you vary much for your comment my dear friend Anne. Appreciated. Love, hugs and kissesxxxxx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Reality marked by wisdom mark your words Ravi.. thoughtful!~Olive Eloisa =')
Sathasivam Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 5:51 AM
Thank you vary much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 3:48 PM
Much wisdom in this one, Ravi!!
Sathasivam Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 5:57 AM
Thank you vary much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Nunez Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 6:26 AM
Hi Ravi. I understand the purity of the proverb's intention. While it is a hard proverb to keep, the soul will do better in being conscious of it. Keep them coming! hugs
Sathasivam Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 5:58 AM
Thank you vary much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
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