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My own proverb

“ Love is the greatest portion of our lives, although sex is hidden in love as a twinkling star”. Proverb by - Ravi Sathasivam

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/15/2014 12:20:00 AM
This one great. Yes sex may be likened to a flavoring agent. Love Ravi...write on..LOVE XXXX rajat
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Date: 12/9/2012 9:54:00 AM
You're right about love, nice flow...I like it...Thanks for commenting on my page...Hugs, Holly
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Date: 12/5/2012 11:13:00 AM
.... .and so we try to star gaze as much as humanly possible. Nice proverb!! gwendolen
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Date: 10/14/2012 11:16:00 AM
really enjoy this one so am seeing it again.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/21/2012 11:49:00 PM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 10/13/2012 4:21:00 PM
Interesting thoughts penned..Sara
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Date: 10/14/2012 1:55:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 10/11/2012 5:50:00 PM
Never thought of it quite that way Ravi but who's to say it is not true. I like the thought and feel the beauty of stars makes your verse so real.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/14/2012 1:56:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 10/10/2012 2:57:00 PM
i like this too Ravi....
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/14/2012 1:56:00 AM
Thanks
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Date: 10/14/2012 1:56:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 10/6/2012 11:13:00 PM
Very nice, Ravi!! If it's for Debs, I think she will love it.
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Date: 10/14/2012 1:56:00 AM
Thanks Andrea