My Own Proverb

“ Love is the greatest portion of our lives, although sex is hidden in love as a twinkling star”. Proverb by - Ravi Sathasivam
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Chakrabarty Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 12:20 AM
This one great. Yes sex may be likened to a flavoring agent. Love Ravi...write on..LOVE XXXX rajat
Moore Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 9:54 AM
You're right about love, nice flow...I like it...Thanks for commenting on my page...Hugs, Holly
Song Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 11:13 AM
.... .and so we try to star gaze as much as humanly possible. Nice proverb!! gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 11:16 AM
really enjoy this one so am seeing it again.
Sathasivam Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 11:49 PM
Thanks Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 4:21 PM
Interesting thoughts penned..Sara
Sathasivam Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 1:55 AM
Thanks
Wesley Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 5:50 PM
Never thought of it quite that way Ravi but who's to say it is not true. I like the thought and feel the beauty of stars makes your verse so real.
Sathasivam Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 1:56 AM
Thanks
Horsman Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 2:57 PM
i like this too Ravi....
Sathasivam Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 1:56 AM
Thanks
Sathasivam Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 1:56 AM
Thanks
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 11:13 PM
Very nice, Ravi!! If it's for Debs, I think she will love it.
Sathasivam Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 1:56 AM
Thanks Andrea
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