My Own Proverb

“Your life will be pleasant or enjoyable when you are wealthy if chosen to live a simple life Your life might become flawed or struggles when you are beginning to show others who and what you really are.” - Ravi Sathasivam
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 12:39 PM
It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today Ravi. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the garden of inspiration and continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
Sathasivam Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 1:19 AM
Thanks for your comment carol Appreciated
Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 7:17 AM
I really agree with the first one. I know that I would be very happy living the way I live but knowing I had wealth to fall on, in my future!
Sathasivam Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 1:20 AM
Thanks for your comment Andrea Appreciated
Chakrapany Avatar
July 10, 2012 at 11:25 PM
i agree with you .nice thoughts .thank you for sharing .jk
Sathasivam Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 1:20 AM
Thanks for your comment JK Appreciated
Hu Avatar
July 10, 2012 at 11:18 PM
but its better to be what u r and b accepted just for u and u alone.:)
Sathasivam Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 1:21 AM
Thanks for your comment Mad Hu Appreciated.
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