Michael Dom Poet Haiku

My Own Favourite Haiku - So Far

Haiku for frangipani in bloom:

nocturnal bouquet 
of frangipani in bloom –
olfactory fruits

teasing aromas
adorning a young girls hair – 
swaying moonlit palms

moths seeking nectar
flutter, flower to flower – 
new buds at sunrise.

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Daver Austin March 1, 2013 at 6:58 AM Love your Haiku, exploring the senses. daver

Bukang Liwayway February 23, 2013 at 11:35 PM awesome haiku friend Michael.. enjoyed reading it today. Congratulations on your win. Love, maria :)

Andrea Dietrich February 22, 2013 at 6:33 PM yes, I remember this one and could see how you found it to be your favorite one. Congrats on the win for your lovely series.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 22, 2013 at 1:34 AM Hi congratulations, great haiku, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

Yanny Widjanarko February 21, 2013 at 6:19 PM Congrats on you win Michael :D wonderful haiku of yours :) - hug, yanny Michael Dom February 21, 2013 at 6:24 PM Sweet as. Thanks Yanny. :-)

Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2013 at 6:12 PM Michael,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA Michael Dom February 21, 2013 at 6:23 PM Loving it. Thanks Linda.

Andrea Dietrich February 19, 2013 at 10:54 PM well, I really like this set!!! I can see why you used these for the contest. I probably should have chosen more wisely than I did in this contest. I think this should do really well!! Michael Dom February 21, 2013 at 5:37 PM Thanks Andrea. :-)

Jeremy Martin February 18, 2013 at 11:44 PM How strange! But there is something so compelling about those furry little guys, isn't there?