Warner Baxter Poet Senryu

My Own Existence - Senryu Chain X5

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father gave me life
his love fills my heart with joy
my daddy is best

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moms are heaven sent
angels on earth mothers are
love like no other

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look for facts I search
I research but get confused
or am I confused

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not my intension
nor a bone of contention
social convention

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I used to be brash
I used to be blazen bold
no more I got old

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Eve Roper July 4, 2015 at 11:58 AM Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve Warner Baxter July 22, 2015 at 11:28 AM Thank you so much Eve

Richard Lamoureux July 4, 2015 at 8:46 AM I enjoyed this progression of life. Congrats. Warner Baxter July 22, 2015 at 11:29 AM Thank you Richard, I am glad you enjoyed it

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 3, 2015 at 10:31 PM Congrats on ur winning senryu Warner! Warner Baxter July 22, 2015 at 11:29 AM Thank you so much Dr. Sharma

Kim Merryman July 3, 2015 at 9:01 PM Warner, congrats on your win! Well done! Love, Kim Warner Baxter July 22, 2015 at 11:30 AM Thank you very much Kim

Skat A July 3, 2015 at 6:49 PM NICE WIN Warner Baxter July 22, 2015 at 11:31 AM Thank you Skat

Poet Destroyer A July 3, 2015 at 6:27 PM Warner, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA Warner Baxter July 22, 2015 at 11:31 AM Thank you so much Linda

Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2015 at 4:58 PM I loved that last one. No more I got old!! Congrats on your win. Warner Baxter July 22, 2015 at 11:32 AM Thank you so much Andrea, glad you liked it