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My Own Battle

Do you enjoy me crying Why do you laugh at my tears You have destroyed my wants And created my fears I want to get out of here I want to gain success But you have trampled me down And caused me to become this mess I wish I could tell someone Of all my pain and hurt The way you disaprove of me And treat me like a speck of dirt But there is no one to tell No one that can understand No one to talk to me And to take me by the hand Because I have pushed them away And don't want them back Because this is my battle to win And now I am ready to attack

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/31/2009 5:44:00 PM
Hi Jessica Abuse of any kind is wrong By the way thank you for stopping by and leaving me a kind critique your thoughts are appreciated. I am working on a poem right now called (Abuse of any kind is wrong) I will post it soon,God bless you always,Dean
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Date: 5/29/2009 6:50:00 AM
BRAVO YOU Jessica!!! I've been there myself, so I know whereof you speak... I especially conneceted to your last verse. Keep fightin' honey! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 5/28/2009 1:17:00 PM
Nice Rhyming poem, talks about a problem, and in the end you found the answer, and the first step to healing. I can relate to this through my daughter and her first husband. Som men are control freeks and buid themselves up by bringing the spouce down. Well said, well read, good message, easy to read and understand the emotion. Judy Riley
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