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Friendship is a fickle flower, First sign of rain, they wilt and cower, Love and loyalty, mere phantoms fleeting, Leaving loss and loneliness deeply seething. In this cursed garden, overgrown with strife, Not one stands by me in this accursed life, Shunned by society, from kinship torn, Left bleeding, my heart scarred by life’s cruel thorn. Amidst the seeds of darkness and choking ivy, A shadowed bloom has lingered beside me, From childhood's first haunted hour, Unwavering, despite the bleakness and dour. Forsaken by all, yet never alone, My silent, steadfast companion has shown, Through life's stormy nights, beneath the darkest pall, My shadow has been there, weathering it all. His quiet vigil, loyal and true, Has been my constant, through and through, For my shadow, has proven my only friend, And will be by my side until the end.

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Date: 7/27/2024 7:01:00 PM
Dear edward, the opening lines in this hit strong for me. The alliterations and word pairings such as fickle flower and depth of what youv conveyed too; yes friendship is a fickle flower for me too, iv been reminded of that numerous times. I love also “ choking ivy” “ lifes cruel thorn” brilliant metaphors and creative use of nature to deliver thoughts: sometimes all we have is us, even our shadow abandons us when its too dark. This i think can resonate with many, pleasure reading this! Love it
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/27/2024 7:36:00 PM
Ink, when life is at its darkest, your shadow does not abandon you, it becomes part of you; entwining with your soul, a fusion of your very essence. It is your dark passenger, empowering you and guiding you, when all others have receded from the storm. A ghostly wraith of strength, courage and resilience.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/27/2024 7:35:00 PM
Ink, when life is at its darkest, your shadow does not abandon you, it becomes part of you; entwining with your soul, a fusion of your very essence. It is your dark passenger, empowering you and guiding you, when all others have receded from the storm. A ghostly wraith of strength, courage and resilience.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/27/2024 7:24:00 PM
Thank you Ink
Date: 7/22/2024 10:05:00 AM
Lovely write enjoyed reading your poem here many blessings
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/22/2024 10:17:00 AM
Thank you Yolanda
Date: 7/18/2024 11:01:00 PM
It sounds like your best friend is yourself. I relate to this poem. Be true.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/21/2024 11:00:00 AM
Thank you Hilda
Date: 7/17/2024 1:25:00 PM
And he'll never cuss you out or yell at you for no reason so, yeah I can see it. Nice one Edward
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/21/2024 11:00:00 AM
Thank you Tom

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