My One and Only

My One and Only….

Why am I smiling?
After having walked a mile
I am seeing you
My One and Only…
If I could bend the wind
I would have flown
To see the one I call mine
You are more beautiful 
Than any dove
Among the reasons I am so much in love
Not just on the outside 
Do you thrill me!
But inside too
There is no need to look for another
Now, that I have 
My One and Only…

Shawn Young (3/29/2016) Copy Write
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 29, 2016 at 10:18 AM
Shawn, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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March 29, 2016 at 12:21 PM
Linda, thank you for the welcome. I will follow-up on your suggestions. Poetic Skills? I don't really know if that fits me. I am exploring to determine if I have any skills. From time to time I have said or written things that friends have felt I should publish. I do enjoy reading others poems and often find myself filled with awe as the writers capture some unique or universal truth, emotion, etc. I welcome your friendship and critique All The Best Shawn
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