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My Old Jalopy

Just had to buy a new battery For my seven year old beat up jalopy Actually I'm exaggerating just a little As cars go it's a very fine copy A four door sedan with all the extras And a dashboard readout to die for Numbers as big as all get out Couldn't really ask for much more But sure can't fool police officers Saying you didn't notice your speed "If you've trouble reading those big numbers Blindness is what you should plead" Aside from that, the time has come Maybe a Porsche or even a Rolls Royce More likely a stylish Mini Cooper Will most likely be my first choice Nice dream, silly boy, now back to reality You're not a teenager any more Better grow up, stop living in the past Grim Reaper's knocking at the door! © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 12/14/2014 12:16:00 PM
Glad it was about that old jelopy....I was worried with the title... Cheers
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/14/2014 1:42:00 PM
Now now Tim! I believe you have naughty thoughts roaming around in your old bean-o! LOL
Date: 12/14/2014 10:47:00 AM
Oh NO! now Hubby's going to build another paper missle... You just had to mention speed... He's into space you know... Or a little spacey... you might say... OK Dragon and Grandpa Troll... Now it's time to laugh!... Er... But not while looking at me! Besides what's so funny! What! You did another UTube video of me in my robe... falling into the Christmas tree... before my coffee... OK What's your caption this time? 'Mommyzilla rises again!' Very funny guys! Very funny! LOL! Never a dull moment!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/14/2014 10:53:00 AM
Never a dull moment at your place eh! You've got me almost believing all your guys are REAL! LOL XXX
Date: 12/14/2014 9:40:00 AM
Lovely Jack ! U can turn anything into poetry my friend, that's something unique in ur pen! God bless!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/14/2014 9:42:00 AM
You are always so so kind my dear friend... thank you! XXXX

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