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My Okra.S Kin

Hi biscuit, you’re mighty and cute So acute in hearing that I’m spearing fruit Perhaps you didn’t know, I’ve lived in the South…too. Entertained a name in the halls of high school I thought it was cool, even back then We were Rebels Trivial this trivia of mine Confuses many versed in sublime My Confucius IS confusing As are my rhymes butt So what if they are They’re just in my mind Xposing me in a Leonine wind (out of the skillet and into the…?) bhindi, also know as a gem ... we banter in Bantu, know?... KinGumbo? Layers of players in a game of purr suits and sLayer the Dragon thought I said suite So he booked a room and waited for treats meanwhile… Derelicts were there as centurion scribes Bricks they made while recording tribes Bows they carried low and to the side ... On a long coarse I watched the hoarse-men ride. Primus asked and the filly said hey… Ask again in the proper way Cute doesn’t cut it, the Cupid had to say. Especially, if the gravy is grey. ”...oh look Vincent, it’s your lobe dear…” ;) . this is written in reply, to someone's reply. it might not make sense but I hope you enjoy :) x

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Date: 4/5/2010 11:40:00 AM
Avocado soup has fewer chucks than this free versed styled ode to the crazy suicidal painter. Great write though!
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Date: 2/27/2010 6:31:00 AM
funny one
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